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Haiku Holoholo

Fellow blogger Nathaniel, of Introvert Japan, just posted a great write-up about the history of haiku. Here is my challenged and cringeworthy attempt at the aged art.

ʻahu mark the path. mokuʻāweoweo. ascent to the gods.

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steep and winding path. quiet wonder in the cliff. nageiredo.

 sighing gentle breeze. like fingers through my loose hair. seduced by the wind.

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rays of light find me. piercing through the canopy. illuminated.

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crumbling at your feet. fragile wall around my heart. you dismantle me.

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Weekly Writing Challenge:  Haiku Catchoo! |  http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/challenge-haiku/